Doesn't look bad, man. I would take everything from the middle to the right, and stack it into the corner. That way you slope from left to right, and it will leave a small pile on the right. Just my .02 It does look better though.
no turbos but i just picked up 4 cerith snails 6 red legs and 1 serpant star yesterday now the only thing i c is one snail actually doing ne work i c 2 of the otehr snails and it looks like they are working on the sand....i have no clue where ne of the other 6 red legs are though they aer kinda big to so who knows but its being worked on...when we go to dc.macs i might get some more if its not clean by then
Cool its lookin better... i saw in another thread someone recommended some Nassarius snails and they do a great job of keeping a sand bed bright white and clean.. you may also want to look into a cucumber for cleaning the sand they are pretty neat.
Your hermits are probally hiding on the back side of the rock doing there job, no worries when its clean back there they'll come out front and clean.
Another good way to keep algae from growing is making sure you have enough flow in the tank.. But since your going FOWLR thats not a super high priority.