Boredom+ Me+ math class= crappy poem

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Salty Bginners

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Yeah, thats right. I write sucktastic poetry in my spare time. And because I want you all to go blind I have decided to post one of my poems here. And yes, you may tell me how horrible it is, I dont mind! ^.^

The End of Time
Its on the face of every Human,
Since the fall of an Angel
Since the dawn of Creation.
The look of Damnation!
The fall of a Nation!
Every Race and every Nation,
Lips stained red with the blood of the Dead.
The bloodlust of war, the sword of the Damned!

From the sky comes a blast of Thunder,
A trumpet horn Bows
The clouds part as the winds Blow
And a fissure shatters the Earth to its Foundation.
From North to South to East to West
A holy rain pors 'cross the Land
The hand of the Lamb gathers the Chosen
And acends to heaven for the last Time.

Shane Spurlin.

Yes, its a religious poem. Get over it.
 
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Hmmm almost a gangsta Christian groove to it Bginniers, you may have come up with a new genera!

Actually it's very good IMO.
 
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