Critique please

oscarmeir

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Please, I want to hear what I can do to make these better.
Thanks
 

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That piece was only $15 in the LFS assorted coral section, or as he calls them "second hand pieces". A steal no?
 
Yup. Good price.

As a group, the shots look somewhat dark / underexposed to me. I also suggest avoiding center composition.
 
I actually was going for thirds in that second shot, the tree is on the left line and the Zoa are roughly on the bottom line
 
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