No need to gate the return, a 1" siphon can handle far more flow than any pump you're looking at. If you feel like getting really fancy, you could use a "coast to coast" overflow box running along the entire back top edge of the tank. Make sure you use a good silicone, like Dow Corning 795 to attach the overflow boxes if they are made out of acrylic. "Normal" pet store silicone does not bond acrylic to glass at all. DC 795 takes a few weeks to cure, but once it does, it bonds to acrylic pretty well. I was able to lift my 40 breeder sump off of the ground using a test strip of acrylic that met the glass for 4". I initially used flimsy HD acrylic baffles and pet store silicone, and they fell out in the sump within a week or two.
That design looks ok, but as others have said, put the refuge on one end. Given how small the sump is for the tank size, I'd honestly consider just forgetting the refugium. It won't be large enough to have a meaningful impact on the tank, and will leave you with less water in the return chamber. With such a tiny return chamber and such a large tank, if your ATO fritzes out, evaporation could take the water low enough that your pump would fry in a day or two. You'll also need room in the sump for heaters and the skimmer, and I severely doubt you'll be left with room for a fuge given how much room a skimmer suitable for a tank that size would take up.
If you can afford the extra $100, I'd seriously consider upgrading the sump to a 40 breeder. You will need at the very least 10 extra gallons of room in the sump if your siphon breaks on the return work and you get 1.5" of tank water plus what was in the plumbing in the tank. 15 gallons plus of empty space would be better. I'd hate to see you end up with a major flood because of a minor power failure.