please proofread

[ladyfsu]

Hi all, supposedly tomorrow but maybe not for longer there is a story coming out in the Tampa Tribune/Pasco Section on what we're doing in class. I'm going to be working on the website tonight (probably not a good thing since I've been enjoying my Miller Lite on spring break all day ). Anyways, lots of people may be seeing this site...including my bosses at district.

Would you mind taking a check to make sure there are no major offenses, grammatical errors or false information? Also, if you can think of any additions or deletions. Is there anything that would offend somoene or make me look ridiculous? Either write it here or pm me. Thanks alot!!!!!!

Remember, this is just for the average person who knows nothing about tanks. I'm not trying to impress the Advanced Aquarists folk...just want a decent site for the parents (and make the suga-daddies of the reef world donate )!!


http://www.reefrascals.org/

Laine

 

[mflamb]

I check it out on a regular basis. Very interesting, accurate and informative. Great work!!!

 

[Steven M]

The site looks good, I'm not much help on grammatical errors.

 

[shibumi]

PM sent

 

[ladyfsu]

Thanks!!

Shib, I tried to fix a couple things you said in a different way since I couldn't do it myself. Try refreshing the pages. Hopefully those blank pages are gone I'll work on the rest when I wake up!

 

[SoundsFishy2me2]

Your students are lucky!

Your students are lucky!

Hey Laine, the students are lucky.. Wow great stuff!
I wondered from your past posts what your class was like!
Site looks great, class looks fun too!

 

[ladyfsu]

Thanks. The article wasn't in the paper today She told me it might be bumped around a few times. LOL, I was lying in bed for a couple hours and finally snuck out at 5am to go get the paper...sheece...now I'm going to the beach for the next 3 days and am going to be POOPED! I hope the hotel has internet, but for my families sake, I hope it doesn't!!

OK well if anyone else sees anything else, let me know please. Shib told me several helpful things. I have more things that we did at school that I'm going to be putting up on the site this morning while the rest of the house is still sleeping.

 

[Acolin]

Looks great! Check Capitalization AND make sURE it is consistent Throughout.