I think I'd reduce the number, after all it's just 33 gallons, even though it is a 4' tank.
Minor changes I would suggest:
1 - Tail Spot Blenny (Ecsenius stigmatura)
2 (1 pair) - Filamented Flasher Wrasse Trio (Paracheilinus filamentosus)
1 single - Firefish Pair (Nemateleotris magnifica) - I think these actually do better by themselves
1 single - Flame Hawkfish Pair (Neocirrhitus armatus)
For the hawkfish, my flame never bothered hermits or snails, just shrimp.
Minor changes I would suggest:
1 - Tail Spot Blenny (Ecsenius stigmatura)
2 (1 pair) - Filamented Flasher Wrasse Trio (Paracheilinus filamentosus)
1 single - Firefish Pair (Nemateleotris magnifica) - I think these actually do better by themselves
1 single - Flame Hawkfish Pair (Neocirrhitus armatus)
For the hawkfish, my flame never bothered hermits or snails, just shrimp.