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Reef Bass

colors and textures
I'm not happy with this pic. What started out as an ok idea I think has tanked due to botched execution. I'm looking for confirmation that my perception of the issues is accurate and suggestions for handling specific situations.

I think I need to reshoot the image before I'll be happy with it but I haven't been able to train my hermit to scale vertical surfaces on command yet, so I might be outta luck.

The concept / goal - good looking hermit facing camera climbing vertical wall composed by rule of thirds with pleasing softly focused coraline background.

First problem - composition. I think I shot the whole thing too tight. My rule of thirds horizontally is now a suggestion of halves. This image is 80%+ of the original shot, with overexposed rock on the left being most of what was cropped out. Also, I think the hermit should be "rule of thirds" vertically, say upper left, which would give a stronger impression of the vertical surface.

Exposure - I think I overly darkened highlights and the image is too flat / dull as a result. The highlights of the left hand portion were doing their best to blow / burn. I should have reduced the exposure to correct that. However, I would still like some detail / light underneath the hermit's shell, which seems like an opposing idea. How should one deal with that type of situation / condition?

Shutterspeed - I shot this at 1/50 which was not fast enough to freeze the rapidly moving red mouth parts. I should have gone faster. However, I was already getting uncomfortable with the ISO at 1250 and I didn't want to open up any more than f8 so I could get most of the front of the hermit in focus. Any options here other than bumping up the ISO or adding external lighting?

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I'm just getting into histograms and color curves. This image has three strong distinct peaks in its histogram. I understand plotting the quantity of a color vertically against its brightness horizontally but am struggling with how to improve an image based on its histogram.
 
I'm pretty horrible at composition, but it seems like the problem may be the color. The whole frame looks as though it is purple on purple on more purple. Is it possible to PP the background to provide more contrast? Perhaps that would help isolate the subject.
 
Yup, I'd have to agree, there's an overabundance of purple that is not helping to offset the subject. Purple camouflage! I can imagine how different it would look if the shell were a lighter mottled cream brown for example. Good call.

I'll talk to the hermit's agent about wardrobe for the next shoot.
 
Yeah thanks. As I was 2/3rds through it I realized I had ideas for how to correct it. As is often the cause, taking the time to articulate the issues often clarifies resolutions. The basic color issue seems beyond my control. There's simply a lot of purple in the tank. But it's a valid point and quite correct.

I suppose I could add a lot of not purple shells and hope my hermits adopt them so I can shoot something contrasting. I'll have to wait to reshoot until I've put the crabs back into my tank (all my hermits are in QT while I'm dosing with Interceptor) and come across one going up or down while I'm shooting.

For now I'm letting it go. I've got plenty of other shots with issues to work through! I'm enjoying remote shooting and that tripod you recommended (Bog/ManF 055XPROB) is terrific. I'm very pleased with it, thanks. It does everything except weigh nothing. The head is working for me too. Much easier than my old 3 way. Plus I can change batteries while still mounted. And the quick release is sweet when I need to pop off too. Much joy in the hardware department.
 
=) I love that tripod. It has done everything I've ever asked it to. But like you said in another thread, with cool verbiage like "X" and "PRO" in the name how couldn't it?!
 
Absolutely! A well named product.

I am looking forward to trying out its "tilt the center column" feature. My oldest is an art major at the Univ of CA and I occasionally take pictures of her art. This tilt feature is custom designed for it. I can lay the piece flat on a table and suspend the camera over it with the horizontal center column. Combine that with remote shooting and there'll be no standing on a chair or ladder looking through the view finder or even trying to see the camera back. Sweeeet.
 
Yes I did and yes you do. I liked your concentric circles idea for determining that you were straight over the subject.
 
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