I have done a lot of sumps and water tanks, but not a display tank. Also never with the pin method. But I have been playing around with the sump and two water tanks yesterday and today and I think I have it just about dialed in. I am using .013 gauge guitar string and the seams are coming out just about perfect. A little too much extra solvent, but I think I can address that. I have some .010 string that I might test out too...
I think with the overflow design and size of the sump that I probably don't even need the check valve, but I will have to think it through.