Those look nice. I just commented because when I was selling my TR ocellaris in the early 90's, the main selling point for my clowns was that other tank raised clowns were very pale. You couldn't tell mine from WC because I was feeding an experimental food called Vibra-gro. At that time, it was the only food that contained astaxanthin and it made a huge difference in my ability to sell the babies to LFSs.
These days there is a lot more competition out there, so your babies will either have to be top of the line or under priced (or both) to get an LFS to buy from you. Those last pics you posted look like they should sell nicely.