No need to apologize, Vladis ...
The effort put forth, by yourself, is more than appreciated by myself, and Im sure many other advanced members as well. Not to mention, as you eluded to above, the photographic aspect of your/this thread is extraordinary and truly speaks for itself ... In a language understood Universally among us ReefKeepers !
Here's what I'll do to help you out, when its feasible for me to do so, and also better allow other members to appreciate this thread as much as I do:
Since the English language, and it's infinite/difficult grammar, is fairly well understood, by myself, Ill transcribe your writings, in a codicil/addendum/postscript fashion, applying any necessary changes ...
This should help you immensely to discern the differences/nuances between your style and proper English writing. Soon enough your own writing will be clear and you will forever have the skill to share your experiences/information !
If, of course, you would like for this to happen. Please advise