Anyone have any comments or suggestions on what I have posted above?
From the looks of it, it appears that you plan on having the DT feed into the overflow with a "shortened DT"? A little bit like an infinity edge pool?
If that is the case, that doesn't sound too great. Whilst, the water will get into the external overflow box, what about wandering fish and whatnot? That is a critical function of the weirs on the overflow boxes. Sure, you will get maximum surface skimming, but it would come at that cost.