Sgt- I agree the valve is the first choke point in the design. Be nice if someone made clear plumbing to monitor for issues. As for the size of the plumbing not being a potential for clogs, I have to disagree. Place your thumb over a 1/2" pipe end, now a 1.5" pipe. Which one is restricted? Interesting in your thoughts on the bleeding system, what have you found out so far?
Mrramsey- I would keep the coast to coast as it provides surface skimming of the entire tank. Yes it does take up some real estate but from what I have read, it is the preferred way to surface skim. And yes the Mag 18 may be overkill, 1500gph @ 0 head. You need to compute your head loss to get your actual flow rate. What size tank do you have?