I had a long response typed out for you but to be honest I don't care enough to post it.
Long story short, your article is entirely based upon your opinions and not facts as evident by your fourth sentence in the first paragraph. Overall, it is poorly written and any hope of communicating in an effective manner is lost to the reader quickly.
If you wish to convince people that they should improve the current situation, perhaps you should take this as a first draft, research the issues, present facts to support your opinions, and have someone else proof read the article before you post again.
Good luck and keep fighting the good fight.
Agree 100% and could not have said it better. You do need to support opinions with facts- otherwise you are relying on peoples faith in you to believe what you say. With the spelling etc, you do not foster faith.